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Title: The Dao of Magic #4 (The Dao of Magic #4) ISBN:
· Kindle Edition 300 pages
Genre: Fantasy

The Dao of Magic #4 (The Dao of Magic #4)

Published October 30th 2019, Kindle Edition 300 pages

A devastated school. A collapsing planet. All eyes on Drew.

After teleporting his students all over the world in a rather dramatic attempt to stave off the inevitable apocalypse, Teach is busy. Instead of sipping and relaxing, he now has to slaughter the most powerful of beasts while running around and saving civilization as a whole. Re-Haan, his dragon mistress, isn’t helping either. She just waves him goodbye as he is swallowed by a massive sandworm.

When he finds an object that should be impossible, a hyper dense projectile just like one that nearly bisected and killed him while he was breaking through, Drew sets out; determined to get to the root of this mystery.

This fresh start isn’t working out the way he hoped, and all the death threats his students are sending him aren’t helping. Teach might just have to face his past for real in order to survive this one.

User Reviews

H Rez

Rating: really liked it
Well, I probably would have given it a better rating but it just feels like it was shorter than it should be and there wasn't much of a plot progression.
It seem mostly like we're just catching up to everyone getting to know a bit of where they ended up and then the book ended.


Michael Haedt

Rating: really liked it
This series continues to be one of the worst written series I have ever come to enjoy. I am no grammar Nazi and I still cringe at the inelegant prose and frankly horrible writing at times.

This series continues to be fun and entertaining in spite of itself. The author is clearly getting better as a writer as the story progresses. Book four impressed me with the depth it is trying to go in universe building and making interesting characters and still managing to keep it consistent and compelling.

I am off to find something of quality to scour my brain and literary sensibilities clean (ish) in the mean time but I will be back for book five the day it drops.


Douglas Debner

Rating: really liked it
Note 1: I listened to an audio book that is not currently listed on Goodreads.com so I placing my review here.

Note 2: I am giving the same review for books 3-5 but book 4 is getting one less star because it was particularly weak on story resolution.

So I've blown through books 3-5 so fast I can't remember where one ends and the next began. Therefore I am going to give them all the same generic review.

The author does a pretty good job of focusing on the journey of the MC. As a result, it isn't disappointing when a book ends and the MC hasn't reached his over all goal of ascending to a higher cultivation realm. The author really tests this, though, not even really attempting to resolve story lines as the MC progresses. Plus, the author is overly detailed, something that I am fine with but limits my ability to recommend these books to others. Even so, it is readily apparent that these books would be twice as good if they contained fewer background details and more story progress.

Part of the problem is the author keeps adding characters, none of whom ever die or otherwise leave the story. I can barely keep track of the story lines following the MC and his seven original students, I don't even try to keep track of the rest of the cast.

The length of this story also has the downside of removing any sense of danger for the characters. The author pretty much establishes by the end of book 3 that no harm is going to come to any of his favorite characters. Between that and the over explanation of everything the big fight in book 5 was completely predictable.

Bottom line: Worth the read for me since I like cultivation books and the author focuses on the MC's journey rather than the MC's destination, but it is a questionable recommendation to others due to a lack of risk to characters and a way to detailed story.


Isaac Norsham

Rating: really liked it
The writing style changed. Before it a proper novel now it looks more like a webnovel/light novel.

No clear plot progression, few chapters that formed to mini arks in the plot.

I just wish the author will continue writing with an ending in mind for later books. Most webnovel authors just churning out many chapters as possible with many plot holes and either just stop without an ending or a rushed ending.


Regarding the decision to separate all the characters is a mix felling for me, I hate and also love the idea. I hate it because it shows that the author don't know how to make a story with multiple characters and missing the interaction and relationship develop between characters. What we get are just solo adventure for each characters. With that, I also love it that each other side character have their own arks to develops and grows. Most novels with many side characters tend to be one dimension.


Kevin

Rating: really liked it
[that is all the students opening their own school of cultivation. (hide spoiler)]


Scott Pike

Rating: really liked it
Consequences come home good book

This was a pretty good but we see a lot of things that were foreshadowed in previous books of the series come to a head and cause bigger problems for everybody and we also see a lot of her characters make what they think seem like okay choices only to learn they were complete morons. Continues the tradition of out of the traditional box cultivation stories in a magical world worst buying starts with the first book in the series.


Paul Calhoun

Rating: really liked it
It's getting better. I think that scattering the school was a bit of writer's convenience so the MC could focus on getting down to the actual plot, though he then gets massively sidetracked again, so not as much happens as could happen. It seems like the MC is all for freedom except he's intentionally inconveniencing his students so they learn something.


Sunmade Ejiwunmi

Rating: really liked it
Nice

I don't know how this series keeps getting crazier but it does. The MC and his associates are getting stronger but they are up against a mind bending soul warping entity. Amazing


Andy Grzywacz

Rating: really liked it
So good, ended so abruptly

This series has been just fantastic from the start. The dialogue is witty, the characters a fantastically bizarre, i love this series. Cant wait for more!


Colby McKinzie

Rating: really liked it
Great new addition

This latest book in the series starts off very oddly and is hard to understand at first, but it gets much better and then had me rolling around laughing my ass off at the end. Highly recommend


Timothy M. Becker

Rating: really liked it
Great continuation

I love how the author decided to separate all the characters and show how they acted in unfamiliar situations. Drew continues to surprise me with how he stumbles throughout everything but still helps everyone else. Great story and cant wait for the next one.


Lukas Lovas

Rating: really liked it
A few very frustrating scenes...but all in all, a good continuation of the series :)


Julie Winter

Rating: really liked it
The Best New Series Of The Year!!

I highly recommend this book and the entire series to all fantasy and sci-fy - LitRPG/Cultivation fans. Start with book one.

This is a cultivation LitRPG. It is not a serous cultivation book. I found it light hearted and fun-fun-fun!

This series has been the best books I have read for the last two years. I have 600 Audibles and over double that kindle books. I read a bit. I review when a book has touched me- good or bad. Feel free to check my other reviews, if they help you decide please click the "Like" button. Thanks!

Yes, I love this book! Just as good as the written word is the Narration. I must say this is the best fit of the written word into audio...of the narrator 'becoming' the protagonist that I have ever known. I have purchased each book but then waited till Audible had them to read and listen because the narration is JUST THAT GOOD. I will be looking into other works by Pavi Proczko.

This series is not just Action-Adventure, Comedy, LitRPG, Fantasy or Science Fiction it is significantly all those genres!! Yes, after careful thought I absolutely put this into science fiction genre too. The writer puts almost more science into it than I could understand; and I finished college. There were some concepts that went over my head, but at the same time I did not feel I was missing out too much. It is like Easter eggs the author has installed all throughout the books. (this just added to the fun) He spends a great amount of time describing events in detail instead of just saying, "Sally had yellow hair." He may say, " Sally's hair resembled a wheat field just before harvest." IF you had ever seen a wheat field in August you could picture the color of her hair. If you hadn't you still get an idea of what was said and do not feel you missed too much. So for all the people out there that have more on the ball intellectually, you will get more out of the books but those that don't, like me, lol, may not but we get the general idea and still we very much enjoy the story. I suspect I missed a lot of humor due to ignorance but I certainly got enough to make it worth my while to already be planning another read/listen starting from the first book. This also makes it fun to check with other people to see if they understood a certain Easter Egg as you did! Fun, all through the series.

If you are thinking about this book---Oh! you are so lucky to have a great series in your future. I paid full price for my books and audios and do not know the author or narrator in any way. However, I now support them in any way I can that might get more Dao of Magic out in the world.

The plot is not tightly written. The protagonist does a lot of...hmmm.. wandering around. But he provides enough entertainment that I was not ever bored!! Each book moved the plot along, some more than others, but every single one is now a treasure to me. I plan to purchase the hard copy for my book shelf and I have not even done that with my all time favorite series, about Harry Dresden written by Butcher.

Again, treat yourself to the narrated version if you can. It is the Book Of The Year for me!


Daniel Healy

Rating: really liked it


Jacob

Rating: really liked it